Hi Matt! I love how professional you looked in your video, It helps get us in the mindset that you are very serious about your idea. I also like how you are standing up, which makes the video more dynamic. I would maybe stay away from personal information like you name, but it did not distract too much from you business idea. It was important how you mentioned that nothing exists yet, to hopefully get investors excited about a new opportunity coming to the table. Great Job!
I like your attire for this pitch! You look very presentable and professional! You had a pleasant tone of voice, and as Anna also stated, I like that you said that nothing like this exists in the market right now, giving your pitch more individuality. I also like your use of hand gestures.
My feedback for next time would be to look more enthusiastic about your idea and to look less at the camera. It would be helpful for you to move around a little and to look left and right, and pretend like there is an actual audience. Also, I would practice your pitch a bit more. There were a few long pauses and stutters here and there, so practicing would help. But overall good job!
Hi Matt! I love how professional you looked in your video, It helps get us in the mindset that you are very serious about your idea. I also like how you are standing up, which makes the video more dynamic. I would maybe stay away from personal information like you name, but it did not distract too much from you business idea. It was important how you mentioned that nothing exists yet, to hopefully get investors excited about a new opportunity coming to the table. Great Job!
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ReplyDeleteI like your attire for this pitch! You look very presentable and professional! You had a pleasant tone of voice, and as Anna also stated, I like that you said that nothing like this exists in the market right now, giving your pitch more individuality. I also like your use of hand gestures.
My feedback for next time would be to look more enthusiastic about your idea and to look less at the camera. It would be helpful for you to move around a little and to look left and right, and pretend like there is an actual audience. Also, I would practice your pitch a bit more. There were a few long pauses and stutters here and there, so practicing would help. But overall good job!