2. Reflection: The feedback on
my last pitch included positive feedback on the way I was dressed. I decided to
continue that in my third pitch by putting on my suit and tie for the delivery
of this pitch. The feedback also noted that the hand gestures added to the
quality of my pitch, so I made sure to try to use some hand gestures in this
pitch too. I was also told that with a little more practice my pitch would be
perfect. It is still not perfect, but I hope I have made some improvements.
3. Changes: I have implemented a request to my prototypical
customer to pay a percentage to me for use of my service. This money will be
used to continue development and innovation as mentioned in my pitch. I feel the
same in front of the camera as I did the first time. I knew the format of my
speech a lot better than I did the first time and I believe I will continue to
change and tweak it to cater to my audiences in the future. I hope this pitch
is better than the previous two if not the best so far. I was in a car accident
on the day of my first pitch so I hope my work seems to have improved since
then.
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