Reflection
Based on my last elevator pitch's feedback, I have made a few changes to my pitch. I have included what my with my product will do and what I plan to do with it. I have also included a part that will inform the listener to the terms of our product use. I listened to your feedback and I have decided to wear my suit again! I did my best to be serious with my presentation and informative. I have also tried to keep implementing my hand gestures, but the camera didn't capture it all this time. The first elevator pitch I recorded was on the day I got into a car accident. It was a lot harder to make that video than it was to make this one. My first video I was having trouble with speaking without making a mistake or pausing for too long. This time I had a basic plan of what I wanted to say and the order to say it in and it made it a lot easier for me to say what I wanted.
Link to pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6DABOrSmd3g
Hi Matt!
ReplyDeleteI like that you’ve stayed consistent with your professional attire. It gives a great touch to your elevator pitch. I can definitely see the improvement in tone, as well as your pitch. You seem a bit more confident, and it shows that you practiced more this time. And it shows great determination in this course that you took the time to do your previous elevator pitch even after an accident. A bit more practice and you’ll have this elevator pitch down pat. Overall, Good job!